Angel of Death

Hello again! Looks like all the grammatical errors have been taken care of, but yeah, when you're writing a story like this, make sure you alleviate the reader from too ...

'Ello there, Ash. Oh, this was such a lovely chapter, and no I have not lost interest. It might have been a long wait, but you didn't disappoint. There was ...

Merry I just love reading your critiques! If you guess who William's in love with, I think I will be baffled. I don't want anyone to know right away, but ...

This was so good! I especially liked the end, it was so unexpected and you built up the suspense very well. Your names are so gorgeous and you have a ...

Thanks so much Merry! Yeah, though I like Jane Austen, I have no clear as to where this came from. Lets just say that when I started writing this, I ...

Hey there! Thanks for the friend request and I love your avi. This town is for people who aren't like me. I cant wait till i can go and i ...

Welp Kylan, looks like another masterpiece is walking around in these parts. I enjoyed this! Though I miss TEB, I can see myself growing to love this too. There were ...

'Ello there. I've never read anything of yours, but I just decided to go with this poem because I love the title and I just have a thing for poetry, ...

Chapter 1 was as good as it was the first time, but more thrilling. I don't know, maybe it was the anticipation that made it so great but it was ...

I will sleep and do dreadful homework and then write write write because that is what I live for. Oh and did I mention, sleep? P.S. I might dance because ...

Congrats, Jiggy! I hope you have many more long and happy years here. *cries and throws confetti* ~Angel

I have been waiting so long for this! Okay, I read the prologue, and I just wanted to review that before I forget anything that I wanted to say. I ...

Hello there Jig, Well, I should resign from the contest, because this looks like a win. I have not an eye for grammatical or things of that sort, so hopefully ...

Note: This might be confusing to some people, but some of the humor comes from last night's chat room conversation and I might make Edward Cullen seem so stupid in ...

Lyric: Ah you're so pretty and your boyfriend is adorable. I'll say maybe he's equally handsome to Edward.